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� Comics - 007 - September 8th, 2008, 3:03 pm

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hiruda, September 8th, 2008, 3:27 pm ( Reply )

I still can't draw airships ; A ; *shot*

weewoo = siren...= _ =

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User Comments:
kiwibung, September 8th, 2008, 3:17 pm ( Reply )

Lmao I was already wondering why nobody noticed a guy landing there XD Very neat page, love it. *w*

LazyEmo333, September 8th, 2008, 3:23 pm ( Reply )

Nice expression in panel one. ^^ *instant fav*

Sientjuhna, September 8th, 2008, 3:37 pm ( Reply )


Also I can't wait till the others show up again.

okami trigger, September 8th, 2008, 4:16 pm ( Reply )

>W< this is just beautiful. can't wait to find out what happens next too

Loonalily, September 8th, 2008, 5:50 pm ( Reply )

Good page but I'm slightly confused. Jack jumped off the building right? did it show him landing? Because next thing I see is him running through the crowds... Did I miss it? SO CONFUSED! D: I'm sorry.

hiruda, September 8th, 2008, 6:04 pm ( Reply )

You're right..it is a bit confusing hehe

I'll just switch the first and second panel around so it makes more sense ^ ^

chellemming, September 8th, 2008, 11:48 pm ( Reply )

I agree, the landing part was a bit unclear, but I guess that adds to the RUCKUS he caused, the sly dog. xDD

SOSO, September 9th, 2008, 7:59 am ( Reply )

your ton is very good ,looks like u work so hard ...

MakiTakami, September 9th, 2008, 10:48 am ( Reply )

J-Jack is so cool *__*

Shinyrubies, September 9th, 2008, 3:20 pm ( Reply )

Ooow this comic is so stylish and...wonderful!

.apples., September 10th, 2008, 11:05 pm ( Reply )

Kay, so far it's pretty neat!
Little odd that we haven't met Rin yet if she's the main character. I do think this is a little more passive since Rin isn't in the main action. If you center the story with her action's instead of Jack's it should be fine, though. Thanks for more fun!

hiruda, September 10th, 2008, 11:53 pm ( Reply )

haha thanks ^ ^
Patience 8DDD She'll show~

Her name's Ril btw...as in Reilly ^ ^

Kaiverta, September 11th, 2008, 5:37 am ( Reply )

Wow, aweeeesome. I can see why you got sooo many fans in such a short amount of time. :O

.apples., September 11th, 2008, 9:23 pm ( Reply )

Gasp! *feels lame*
Sorry! :0

By the way, I really like the next page. Maybe it's because I'm crazy too. xDDD

akari_mizunashi, September 24th, 2008, 6:23 pm ( Reply )

You should put up the old version, too. It was also nice, although I admit that this version is fanfreakingtastic.

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